Once receiving the feedback on our first draft's, this week has consisted of improving our magazine work based on the comments received by our classmates and teachers. I have focused on the improvements suggested and also experimented with enlarging certain photo's and swapping the layout of the images a little, just generally experimenting with what could look better where. Here is a scanned print screen of one of the changes I initially
made to my double page spread...

Although I do like this I, and everybody that I asked, do prefer the original photo of the four combined as it was more unique and resembled a film strip look. I also think that several different images relate more to Courtney Love's character and personality so I will keep that style instead.
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